Look at me,
all smart and new,
but who knows who,
stole my shoe,
I have only one left,
that too of my left,
my dear sunlight,
to avoid slipping over dew,
and over moonlight too,
did by any chance you?
stole my shoe?
I limp through,
I kip asking,
who knows who
stole my shoe,
hey miss night,
were not you called a 'day' before,
just to go black
did by any chance you,
stole my shoe
It can be any one under the blue,
who ran with my shoe,
is it the cuckoo,
who made it her nest,
or is it the mushroom,
whose umbrella broke this monsoon,
or is it the glue,
friend of stapler,
who took it along
for her marriage with paper,
baffled as a porcupine,
I asked 9,
excuse me, thats my shoe,
9 said "you buy new,
I was tired of standing on one leg,
and my only leg pained,
you gave base to 1 and arms to 7,
4 just stood twice with 2,
rest rested on there belly,
that is sad and true,
I stole your shoe"
6 comments:
there are 2 parts to it buildup and the art
Buildup-was a mix of cliches and innovation
Ex-sunlight was a beauty.Moonlight was rather predictable so rather uncalled for.
Plus i have read the night and day comparison more times then the night and days ever happened
but the mushroom and umbrella was quite artsy.
Art-the last para was brilliance very innovative and spell bounding use of personification.u sure its not plagerised or say "inspired"
not plagerised, at all,but inspired from stanley ka dabba,personification at its best....just thought of writting something silly and meaningles..
1 cheez samjh nahin aayi "9".
but its beautiful just like that so don't explain...........
Gud 1....luv it.
:) nuthing i just like the number !
Firstly,sumit.. one ques,y wont u write more dude?wa made u quit writing,evn if it doesnt make sense to people,u ought to write for urself yar.
Anywz,i smiled huge,on '9'..thankfully now i know the whole logic behind this 9,1,4,7 n belly etc,indeed its a very beautiful and innovative thot.a sweet n a senseless try yet thots hidden behind!
you are good. :)
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